Voices

‘All tears fall to the same earth’

Our region’s poets respond to the Israel-Hamas War

In a 1916 letter, Robert Frost described his vision of a complete poem as "one where an emotion finds the thought and the thought finds the words."

It is impossible not to be affected by raw emotion and grief when contemplating the sheer scope of death and destruction in this latest chapter of many years of conflict and contradiction: In the Oct. 7 attacks on Israel, Hamas took the lives of 1,200 people and took 240 people hostage. By Nov. 24, some 14,500 people have been reported killed by Israel's retaliations.

Members of Write Action, a community-based, grassroots writers organization with its membership base in southeastern Vermont, have submitted this collection of poems. For a variety of reasons, The Commons usually leaves poetry to other publications and venues, but when Arlene Distler brought this idea forward, we agreed that a special feature in this week's Voices section could bring a fresh approach to helping words, ideas, and universal truths resonate in an increasingly polarized environment. And make no mistake - this environment is polarized. Just before we first wrote these words on Monday, three young people of Palestinian origin were shot in Burlington. Don't think for a moment that it couldn't happen here.

May these words from our region's poets (including Vermont's former poet laureate) speak to a common humanity and serve as a clarion call for us - all of us, from those who are trying to learn and understand what is going on to those who are approaching these issues with deep convictions and moral clarity - to retain and maintain grace, compassion, fairness, and respect. -Jeff Potter, editor


Bearing Witness

The children of Gaza with piercing dark eyes

are caught by the camera,

faces smudged with ash, dirt, blood

confused, not yet old enough for anger, for anguish,

not yet old enough to know what they've lost.

§§On the other side of the fence

that separates the powerful

from the powerless,

there too are pictures of children -

those captured or killed

parents, siblings in grief, worried

as days roll on with no mercy

on either side.

§§Screams, the blank stares of children,

their bodies contorted, limp

carried through rubble

by hands that had loved them,

tended them.

§§Grief knows no language barrier.

Now do you get it?

Is this what it takes for two peoples

to recognize their kindred humanity?

§§-Arlene I. Distler, Brattleboro

Beneath an Ancient Olive Tree

As I stopped to take a needed rest beneath an ancient olive tree,

within a peaceful desert grove southeast of Ashkelon,

I heard a whisper, "What once had been will never be again for thee."

§§A lonely desert lark - it sang a mournful dirge, but for whom I could not see.

The song I heard exclaimed all joy and peace herein would soon be gone,

as I stopped to take a needed rest beneath an ancient olive tree.

§§Next spoke the wind. She sighed a sigh of sadness - a tearful elegy -

perhaps a warning that this peaceful desert grove was weak and wan.

I heard a whisper, "What once had been will never be again for thee."

§§The tree, itself, appeared to reach out weeping - its olives rancid, foul debris.

No one resolved to take its branches. I sensed apocalypse anon,

as I stopped to take a needed rest beneath an ancient olive tree.

§§I heard thunder in the desert. I saw Negev's scarlet scree

spread out across a stark terrain at break of dawn.

I heard a whisper, "What once had been will never be again for thee."

§§This peaceful desert grove, it is a site I had longed to see.

So, I came, but saw instead a tribulation - peace, a sacrificial pawn.

As I stopped to take a needed rest beneath an ancient olive tree,

I heard a whisper, "What once had been will never be again for thee."

§§-David Kent Young, Stratton

I woke with the word "rage" embedded in "tragedy."

§§GAZA / GUILFORD

1.

the rage :: in tragedy

not arable :: unbearable

§§the ache :: in treachery

and spite :: with no respite

§§scant rations :: for generations

the rift :: is short shrift

§§the lure :: despite failure

the loss :: is colossal

§§how vile :: to be servile

literate :: obliterated...

§§2.

Shots ring through autumn.

They trigger no panic.

§§Who's sighting a rifle

or hunting for winter?

§§Our pal will stop over

with quick-frozen venison.

§§I'll offer fresh cider

but it doesn't agree with him.

§§We chop trees for the stove.

I pay in the kitchen.

§§This warmth changing hands

is our benediction.

§§- Verandah Porche, Guilford

* * *

I called my Israeli cousins living in a horrible war

Who grew up in South Africa so our relationships were poor.

When we tried to talk politics

We thought we were going to find a fix.

But we hear different news

Which lead us to different views.

I stopped trying to convince

No longer did we slide down a cliff.

We told stories about our lives

Which led us to discover our ties.

We continue to send love every single day

We hope to keep our differences at bay.

§§-Lynn Levine, East Dummerston

Current Conditions

"[Every day the adult human body produces] 200 billion red blood cells, 10 billion white blood cells, and 400 billion blood platelets [...]". -"The origins of bone marrow as the seedbed of our blood," Barry Cooper, M.D.

§§I look at the images in the news

and have to turn away

my gorge rising

§§I attend an event

at our local school

and find myself

hypervigilant

§§I hear a plane

fly overhead

and struggle to imagine

running with my children

to the nearest shelter

§§Look - a pheasant runs across the road

flash of blood-red face

§§-Nancy A. Olson, Putney

Did Max Ehrmann Ever Doubt?

"And whether or not it is clear to you, no doubt the universe is unfolding as it should […]. [I]t is still a beautiful world." -from "Desiderata" by Max Ehrmann

§§Hamas has invaded Gaza and

it's difficult to determine whether

the universe is unfolding as it should or

whether it's a catastrophic mess not

to be confused with history as it

intensely repeats itself until peace is

foreign and tomorrow's promise not clear.

§§A notification on my phone interrupts to

break my news feed obsession - a text from you

§§about tickets for tonight's star performance by

a young neighbor in the local high school play

where there's also a fundraiser at intermission

and brownies I promised to bake for

her class's travel to - of all places - Vietnam.

So maybe things do reset if not resolve in time

and I can stir the mixing bowl, regain my calm

§§more easily than one who ducks from Hamas's bombs

shelters a child and disappears more quickly than

§§I swallow the last taste of chocolate on the edge

of the bowl, place a pan in the oven and wait

for the stage lights with their full-house applause to

shine on our young friend as she takes a bow while

you and I glance at one another,

nod our heads in recognition.

It is still a beautiful world.

§§Not in surrender to fire nor fury

the forest leafs out at dawn.

§§-Anna N. Jennings, West Townshend

* * *

I keep tying and untying my shoelaces

splitting hairs over definitions

in the absence of meanings

like little dolls bundled preterm

on the hospital floor

cold like the memories of tortured pasts

genocide, holocausts

8 million then, now unimaginable

to the point of forgetting

where we came from

and why we are here

§§-Stephen Minkin, Brattleboro

Lives Lost

§§Where does the story start?

How did it begin?

§§Can we trace the path that brings us here today?

The same path that ends at the heels of our feet

§§Tracks of countless footsteps left in dirt, sand, mud

Laid across soils forever stained

§§We can't tell which ones wielded the sword - or fell to it

Which ones drew blood - or bled

§§But today we can tell - we just need to look up

Look up to see the swords in hands

§§The blood still red, flowing

Cries still piercing the air

§§Do the cries of innocents leave their own mark?

Do they share the same fate?

§§All tears fall to the same earth

Wet the same path of countless words and lives lost

§§Only the story never dies

§§-Mel Martin, Newfane

Drooling After a Perfect World

(after Franny Choi)

§§The woods, this morning

were perfect

mostly golden

soggy underfoot

following a seep down

§§Next to the brook, a wolf maple

beheaded

arms akimbo, above

a trunk thickened

with centuries

§§Danny is in the Negev

Trees, buildings, people

all blasted

Sitting shiva for soldiers

died in service,

And civilians

by terror

What's the difference?

They're all dead.

The hostages and

Palestinians fear and

maybe wish

they were

Who thought war was a good idea?

§§Perfect sunshine

running water

I sit in paradise

Around me, decay

decomposition

death

§§A tree

unable to get up

feeding legions:

beetles, worms,

fly larvae

§§I've come to Paradise

Shot through with

spider thread

Back to a tree

filled with dread

afraid I'll get lost while

lusting to spear a

white-tail dead

§§-Deborah Lee Luskin, Williamsville

Metta 4 Peace

Last night we watched a film, Levitated Mass,

about one man's vision for an installation

a massive project involving many

working together in a concerted effort

to accomplish this man's dream -

an enormous boulder

moved through the streets, communities

where people came out to gawk, to cheer,

to stare in wonder

at the huge rock, and the four enormous trucks pulling it.

Over 100 miles it traveled

to its L.A. museum destination.

Many of us thought of peace in Israel

watching this immovable rock being moved

amid celebration, the impossible possible,

children gleeful.

It could have been called Hope.

§§-Arlene Distler, Brattleboro

My Fears, Nov. 19, 2023

I fear the chaos in thought the unexamined chaos in thought

I fear the inhumanity its power to shape events

I fear the impossibility of pausing, stepping back from the static

I fear ambient projectiles blowing up dreams

I fear Trump, MAGAs, Putin Republicans, Biden's failure to step aside

I fear the extinction of the Commandment Thou Shalt Not Kill

I fear Humpty Dumpty and the Emperor's New Clothes

I fear the bombs and cruelty

genocides and holocausts

the cries of child ghosts in shrouds

I fear the deniers, the justifiers

I fear my own indifference

and yours

§§-Steve Minkin, Brattleboro

'Not so Deep as a Well, Romeo, but It Will Do'

Sometimes reading the news

is like hearing from cat after cat,

crying about the monstrous dogs

with no mention of the mutilations

of songbirds or mice.

Truly horrific true stories

about kittens chased mercilessly,

feline spines, bit in two by the evil dogs,

and no mention of the ratcheted claws

and the thrashing hind feet,

gutting the squirrels who could only

squirm to get free

and were left headless

on doorsteps at dawn.

A blessing on both your houses.

§§-Rolf Parker-Houghton, Brattleboro

The Silence

You standing at the doorsteps, enter

and drink Arabic coffee with us

(you might sense you're human like us)

you standing at the doorsteps of houses,

get out of our mornings,

we need reassurance that we

are human like you!

-Mahmoud Darwish

§§I want peace right now while I'm still alive.

I don't want to want like that pious man who wished for one leg

of the golden chair of paradise. I want a four-legged chair

right here, a plain wooden chair. I want the rest of my life peace now.

-Yehuda Amichai

§§is deafening here because it amplifies

the ordnance exploding "over there,"

which no matter how hard I try

not to hear, it continues to boom

inside the ear inside my ear

where the sounds of that intransigent,

ancient war exceed the speed

of light on the wings of news.

I'm whispering because I can hardly speak

in the din that cripples my tongue.

I'm releasing doves from inside

my chest through the door I've opened

for them - each one a priest delivering

an elegy for a child or parent or sibling

or friend who's died at the hand

of the enemy whose God is the same

monotheistic deity with a different name.

I play a song in vain to subdue the silence

like a patient on the ward who hears

so many voices simultaneously

they cause him to scream.

Can you hear? The scream grows

louder and louder inside the silence.

§§-Chard de Niord, Westminster West

Ursula K. Le Guin at the Border

Ursula, who died five years ago,

told me in an essay,

that fantasy literature

allows people to read stories

of outrageous behavior

without triggering the identities

of nations people feel

partisan about,

so that compassion can sweep the reader

into the caressing currents

before they have a chance to resist

the final powerful tug

of that great ocean,

and their prejudice has a chance

of getting washed off

into the relief of grief.

Outrageous behavior by Martians

against the people of Pluto

and by the people of Pluto

against the people of Mars

can be recognized by everyone

as unacceptable, indefensible, unjust,

and - most importantly - avoidable.

§§Bombs aren't just for maiming and killing people,

they have other important purposes.

And bombs aren't just dropped anymore,

relying on some hotshot young ace pilot, with

excellent vision, a steady hand, and a good aim.

No, that's so December 1941.

§§Bombs are guided by lasers now

and the reporter, writing in 2022, pointed out

it is no accident, that they landed

on Anthedon Harbour in Gaza,

exactly where the archeologists had been working

on a world heritage site,

a place where ancient Greek and Egyptian,

then Philistine, then Byzantine, then Arab sailors,

displaced each other

and docked their boats

for more than 3,000 years

and left their homes,

and their engraved stones,

and even their bones, now all blown to bits

by a bomb and then another bomb,

craters replacing the carefully measured

transect lines of the archeologists.

The news story featured Palestinians outraged,

over what was done,

and more importantly,

who had done it.

§§On the West Bank, in 2021,

an ancient wall that was protecting

the oldest Israelite unhewn altar stones

was ripped out of the earth of Mount Ebal,

by a Palestinian road crew.

The news story featured Israelis outraged

over what was done,

and more importantly

who had done it.

§§Ursula, I know I've fucked it up

by not setting today's news on Mars,

and just stealing it from the newspapers

in some attempt to frame

parallel stories that will be brushed aside

by some readers as some attempt

to create false equivalence.

And these last lines

are just a placeholder

for the ones that will allow some reader

to cradle another person's pain,

like a crying newborn

they tenderly welcome

into their lives.

§§-Rolf Parker-Houghton, Brattleboro

Wisdom

{em}{em}better to look out a window

{em}{em}than listen to the radio

§§one crow footprints a white roof

pecks reconnects with snow

§§by mid-day warmed to ice pellets

a treachery incomparable to war

§§that devastates scares up another

holocaust as protestors not per-

§§ceiving rooted complexity are wise

to scream for ceasefire to scream

§§against persecutors power-grabbers

death's stench along numerous roads

§§as the crow gathers strength wings high

onyx feathers stark contrast

§§to what falls imprints disappearing

amid calls of prayer across air-currents

§§-Louise Rader, St. Johnsbury

* * *

We {em} open our eyes on this {em} the second day of the hostage exchange

the second day of the cease fire in the land of sand

under the auspices of Gods in all languages.

§§We {em} rise from our beds

§§on this {em} the second day of the ceasefire declared in the land of dates.

§§We {em} bow our heads to the hostages exchanged

released from dark tunnels

who walk slowly

exhausted and dazed

into light.

§§We see the tears of the families who wait.

§§We bow our heads to those buried under rubble whom we cannot see or name.

We {em} open our eyes on this {em} the second day of the hostage exchange.

bow our heads to body parts

let go of how {em} why {em} when..

§§We {em} open our eyes on this {em} the second day of the hostage exchange

arranged by the brokers of peace cloaked in opulent robes who drink from golden bowls.

§§We stare at the hands of the clock

pray the cease fire will never end.

§§-Toni Ortner, Putney

This Voices Poem was submitted to The Commons.

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